I liked the first chapter. Solid pacing, great characterization, interesting story, one of the best first chapters I've seen on itch if I'm being honest. The action was simple and nice, no purple prose. Hope more updates come out soon.
Right now, your pronouns depend on if you select person, woman, or man when customizing your MC. I'm going to add a separate way to change pronouns in the menu. I'll try to have it done for the next update.
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I liked the first chapter. Solid pacing, great characterization, interesting story, one of the best first chapters I've seen on itch if I'm being honest. The action was simple and nice, no purple prose. Hope more updates come out soon.
Just now came to re-read it, super surprised to see the improvement in the updated version, good job!!!!
it was great to find this story again. I enjoyed the OG demo version but this one was better.
This is great! Although would it be possible to pick our pronouns? Being stuck as They is a little weird.
Right now, your pronouns depend on if you select person, woman, or man when customizing your MC. I'm going to add a separate way to change pronouns in the menu. I'll try to have it done for the next update.